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Offline Hunril

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the story of hunril pinkpanther
« on: February 09, 2005, 03:12:43 AM »
Ive never been good at telling storys but im going to try


          This is the story of a young beastlord and his adventures. My adventure starts in SharVahl.This all started  on one moonlight night I was walking throgh the streets of Shar Vahl to my home. When sudently I herd a loud crash. This crash sounded like armor hitting the floor so I ran to see what was going on. When I got the I found to my disamay my brother Foorbahl dead. I didnt know what to do a was so upset . When I finaly got the strenth to move I ran to the guards as quick as i could to only find them slaughtered also. So then I ran to the king as fast as i could only to find him sitting there with the head council. The council man Kala'Dun spoke feircly at me about me being a murder. But yet I had no clue what was going on , then after the toung lashing I heard the kings voice sternly he told me" I am very sorry but you are to be exiled from Shar Vahl for the saftey of you and the Var Shirs". I couldnt beleive my ears , So I fled from the town on my way out people were mumbeling nasty remaks about me. But yet I kept running , that night I vowed to find the killer of my brother and the one person who has hurt my home


PART 2

           My travles had lead me to the snowy city of Halas, Why Halas you ask well Halas has the second best beastlord guild next to Shar Vahl. So when I reached the snowy gates the guard gave a loud shout " HALT TRAVELER WHO ARE YOU". I replied " I am Hunril a travler who wishes to follow in the footsteps of his fallen brother and become a beastlord".
         So as I reached upon the beastlord guild I was nervous word had gotten out about what I had been falsly accused for in my home land. But as I entered the door and I was looked upon with warm smiles. The guild master said warlmy to me " So my friend you wish to become a beastlord." I softly nodded to indicate yes i did, When sudently the guard came crashing in" GET HIM HE IS A MURDER." So as the guard tryed to capture me i felt something go off inside when sudently these words burned in my mind. I repeated them quicky and sudently I summoned my loyal warder. As we fled the town I went to my last hope, The place of equal opertunity only know as the plane of knowledge.


PART 3

       when i had reached the plane of knowledge I seeked out the guild master. This very guild master taught me everyhting i know to this day and in some sence i considered him my father. But the one I visited him only to find him sobbing. When I asked what is wrong he told me he was so sorry. When I ased for what he told me it was all him. That he spied on me in Shar Vahl for some time and set up the whole murder. When I herd this i furiously sent my warder after him. My warder shreaded him to peices then realizing what i had done i toomnk what was rightfully mine. I took his Claw of the savage spirt and I felt the power.
         The next part of my jounrey lead me to Dawn Shroud Peaks were I was goingt to kill rockhopepr and sell thier hides at top dollar.......

Aww I got writes block ill get back to you with more if u like it let me know its really my first time writng a story like this so be easy if u dont liek it =)



Hunril Hanglow // 56 primalist of eci
"a great person once said the only diffrence between stupidity and genius is genius has its limits" =)

Offline Merescata

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Re: the story of hunril pinkpanther
« Reply #1 on: February 09, 2005, 06:50:53 PM »
Not too bad for your first story.  Keep working at it.  :-)
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Re: the story of hunril pinkpanther
« Reply #2 on: February 09, 2005, 08:30:13 PM »
thanks alot i think i need to elaborte a little more
Hunril Hanglow // 56 primalist of eci
"a great person once said the only diffrence between stupidity and genius is genius has its limits" =)